Goal settings for term 4

The magical umbrella

once upon a time there was a girl called cinderella. they called her cinderella because she was very beautiful and kind and was just like cinderella. then one day cinderella was going to her friends house by herself. her parents said to be careful of the cars. so cinderella said yes and went off to her friends house. when she was going alone to way it started to rain so loud that she couldn't hear or see anything!
then on the ground was a shiny magical umbrella. she took the umbrella and covered herself. then with the umbrella was a little fluffy cloud. on the cloud it said, Eat me! so she did. then she started to float in the air! she was so frigtened that she screamed even louder than the rain! then she started enjoying her ride. she looked down at ella'a house. she landed at ruby's house. ruby was cinderellas best friend.
she rand the doorbell. nobody answered. then she started calling them. is nobody there? she said. then she went flying backwards back to her house. then she just fell asleep in her room.                                                                      The end.
                                                            

My holiday

in the holidays i went to the shopping mall to buy some summer clothes to ware at summer.
i brought a dress at postie. it has blue flowers and a baby blue backround. then
we went back home. i didn't have a fun holiday. and then after we went back out to the shopping mall and i brought a new l.o.l doll.